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Mermaid Eye by cryingunderwater Mermaid Eye by cryingunderwater
"You gotta bat your eyes, like this." - The Little Mermaid

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Allrighty, so you've asked me to give you a critique for this one. Mind you, I'm not very much into photomanips the way it done here. However I do some retouching of my own captures, but never add, but I do remove stuff which are distraction.

I'll get straight to the point here. I think you should give more life to the eye. The way you can do this is by adding those tiny, tiny bloodveins (in lack of the correct enlgish word) to the completely white section of the eyes. You don't need to make them that visible to give you a leadingeffect.
You might also consider doing the purple part surrounding the iris a bit darker. This will create a swallowing effect to the eye.
Also I'd darken the gems on her eyelids some.

These are my opinions. As I said this is a bit out of my comfortzone, but I have an idea of how things should look to be more realistic.

You've done a really good job with your manips of the eyes linked from this image as well :)

Hope this was helpful :)
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Serzart Featured By Owner May 7, 2013   Digital Artist
Wow! This is beautiful. Great job!
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cryingunderwater Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much :)
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Serzart Featured By Owner May 7, 2013   Digital Artist
You're welcome :)
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annaescapicua Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome colors, I like the texture and the bokeh.
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cryingunderwater Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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annaescapicua Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
My pleasure sweetie!
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JamesWinslett Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Photographer
Incredible colours! :)
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cryingunderwater Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aw thank you :heart:
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Dieffi Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I have featured this beautyful picture in my newest BLUE - collection! [link]

Hope you will enjoy and agree! :icontimmy64plz:
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cryingunderwater Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Wow, thank you kindly :)
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